There is a huge number of people who are coming from rustic places to metropolitan cities to dwell in city areas. Generally, this dramatic increase in modern cities affects the shape of the cities. In my opinion, it must be under the supervision of the government to prevent uncontrolled construction.
First and foremost, constructing unattractive buildings is harmful to people's psychology. Normally, people are influenced by the buildings they see like other things they exposed to. Moreover, the undeserved shapes of the building affect people' minds and souls as a result of seeing them in every moment. This unorganized whole of the constructions makes people feel like also their mindsets are got confused and bored by these buildings. For instance, I do not want to go out in order not to see this undeserving picture of my city because this irregular picture causes these feelings what I wrote above. Furthermore, governments are responsible for society's psychology.
In addition to this, this kind of building style brings about unorganized cities to let the big numbers of people resident properly in these urban areas. As a consequence of the improper houses, there is numerous of odd buildings which must be controlled by the government. Moreover, the government should prohibit the irregular construction in the cities to estimate more proper buildings to establish people properly. For example, several people in slums are not established appropriately by an authority.
To summarize, constructing bizarre and ugly houses should be under the responsibility and control of government to prevent disadvantageous results such as feeling strange and not be able to resident appropriately. To control these outcomes, the authority should take care of them and not ignore these buildings.
- In the past 100 years, there are many inventions such as antibiotics, airplanes, and computers. What do you think is the most important invent for the past 100 years? Why? 80
- Nowadays, television is an essential part of our lives, as a medium to spread news and awareness, and, for some, it even acts as a companion. What is your opinion about this? 77
- Team sports are general promoted as a great way to keep fit and build character. However, sporting events such as soccer matches are often accompanied by violence between rival supporters and other forms of antisocial behavior. If sporting events can lead 77
- Some people believe that building unattractive houses should be prohibited because they are exposed to the public. What is your opinion about this? 77
- Journalism is one of the most difficult jobs in the world. What’s your opinion? 77
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, moreover, so, well, for example, for instance, in addition, kind of, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 31.9359605911 150% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1522.0 1207.87684729 126% => OK
No of words: 282.0 242.827586207 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39716312057 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11545357909 2.71678728327 115% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 139.433497537 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567375886525 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 379.143842365 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1623465352 50.4703680194 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.466666667 104.977214359 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8 20.9669160288 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 7.25397266985 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285736439806 0.242375264174 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0862218504026 0.0925447433944 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528948422586 0.071462118173 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151179550423 0.151781067708 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0572936487375 0.0609392437508 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 12.6369458128 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 53.1260098522 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 11.5310837438 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 55.0591133005 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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