Nowadays, television is an essential part of our lives, as a medium to spread news and awareness, and, for some, it even acts as a companion. What is your opinion about this?
In this contemporary world entertainment for a person is inevitable to burst their stress by many ways but Television plays a important role on the spending time. I will elaborate my opinion in the following paragraphs.
Now a days each house has at least one television and it is depending on their economy to watch programmes and movies to spend time to relax them self. Even some country offer a free television to the people for each house. Now a days by using TV we can get a news immediately throughout the day like share market, weather update etc... even some home makers make verities of food by watching cooking programmes. if no one is in our home Television must be our companion to entertain.
On the other side of the coin, it has some disadvantages also because some people are getting narrow-minded those who are addicted to the television. Because they believe what they said in the Television. For instance now a days teens are want to be fighting like WWE its atrocious then how they put concentration on academic. Even they didn’t speak to their parents or roommates those who are sitting nearby them.
To sum up, if anything is huge that is very dangerous. So use a technology in a useful way to develop our knowledge and improve our education.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 125, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...tress by many ways but Television plays a important role on the spending time. I ...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
... opinion in the following paragraphs. Now a days each house has at least one television ...
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Line 3, column 5, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...nion in the following paragraphs. Now a days each house has at least one television ...
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Line 3, column 58, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...ouse has at least one television and it is depending on their economy to watch programmes an...
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Line 3, column 225, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
...elevision to the people for each house. Now a days by using TV we can get a news immediate...
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Line 3, column 414, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...of food by watching cooking programmes. if no one is in our home Television must b...
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Line 3, column 414, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “if” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...of food by watching cooking programmes. if no one is in our home Television must b...
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Line 5, column 151, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ose who are addicted to the television. Because they believe what they said in the Tele...
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Line 5, column 219, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...ey said in the Television. For instance now a days teens are want to be fighting like WWE ...
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Line 7, column 76, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a useful way" with adverb for "useful"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... is very dangerous. So use a technology in a useful way to develop our knowledge and improve ou...
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Line 7, column 144, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ur knowledge and improve our education.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, at least, even so, for instance, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1057.0 1207.87684729 88% => OK
No of words: 223.0 242.827586207 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7399103139 5.00649968141 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8474100464 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645739910314 0.580463131201 111% => OK
syllable_count: 345.6 379.143842365 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.1930832788 50.4703680194 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.3076923077 104.977214359 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1538461538 20.9669160288 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.15384615385 7.25397266985 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.33497536946 206% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178297956542 0.242375264174 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0593234845718 0.0925447433944 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045756806304 0.071462118173 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0921337260861 0.151781067708 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0402632897312 0.0609392437508 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 12.6369458128 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 53.1260098522 118% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.9458128079 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 11.5310837438 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.32886699507 92% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 55.0591133005 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 62.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 56.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.