Now a days many young people leave home at an early age to either study or work in other cities do u think this as more advantage or disadvantage for young support your point ?
In this fast-pace world, when compared to primitive age many young people are migrating from their native place to other cities for academic as well as employment. The one of the reasons behind this is urbanization. It has both merits and demerits. I will explain my point of view about this in the following paragraphs.
Firstly, now a days people wants proper academic career to cope with in this world so, they move from their place to nearby cities because education is inevitable. Cities only having not only an enriched education but also job opportunity. Youngsters need world exposure to develop themselves. If you are stay away from home it will help you to work independently and develop your own decision-making skill it leads you to your next level of maturity. Because every day you dealing with stranger only.
On the other hand, it has many demerits also. Many students are feels lonely called home sick when they stay away from home loneliness will kill your confidence easily. So it affects academic results. Moreover, if any illness they should care themselves but no one care like a mother. Possibility for follow a wrong path is more because there is no one to guide you or advising.
According to my glimpses, it has both cons and pros but my opinion falls into this leaving from home at young is the right one to know about the variety of people and learn how to survive in the society. It creates you to work in different field.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, well, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 20.9802955665 153% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1207.0 1207.87684729 100% => OK
No of words: 254.0 242.827586207 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75196850394 5.00649968141 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54785252381 2.71678728327 94% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 139.433497537 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59842519685 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 387.9 379.143842365 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.2247225803 50.4703680194 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.4375 104.977214359 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.875 20.9669160288 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.25397266985 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 2.91625615764 240% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256069240739 0.242375264174 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0649821774706 0.0925447433944 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0573996229701 0.071462118173 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148200283217 0.151781067708 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0389630494823 0.0609392437508 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 12.6369458128 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 53.1260098522 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.9458128079 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 11.5310837438 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.32886699507 92% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 55.0591133005 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 64.4444444444 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 58.0 Out of 90
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