experience is a best teacher?
Experience is the best teacher.” Means experience teach us so many things in our life. Some people advocate that difficult knowledge is not a good lesion while others, however, stand a very different ground. As far as I am concerned, I vote for former choice that difficult experience is always a father of wisdom.
“To err is a human” is another best saying someone say. We all tend to make a trivial to heavy mistakes intentionally or unintentionally and face a miserable consequence. We should always learn from our experiences. It makes us stronger and wiser. To teach from someone else experiences is a valuable lesion of life.
Furthermore, Success is a great integration of a good motivation, a good procedure and a good result. To achieve it, one must do hard work. For instance, toddler fells of the ground for many times before he knows how to walk. In addition, a child learns to swim after he drinks water in pool. Both toddlers and child work hard and face so many difficulties before they reach success. Success means try and fail but never fail to try.
Moreover, difficult experience helps us to gain more knowledge and self-confidence. When I started a job, I felt nervous. I did not have to understand rules of my job. In addition, I was shy, so did not talk to anyone. First few days, I had felt difficulties but now I interrogate with everyone. I can understand everyone’s behaviour and rules of a job. Someone saying that “In the middle of difficulties lies opportunities. Sometimes we make mistakes by ourself and bring obstacles after dealing with those difficulties we can reduce mistakes. Smoking is an injurious for health after knowing that one should not try for it. To learn from someone experience is also good for us. Smoking causes cancer and other health problems.We get all sorts of lesions. Difficult experience is gift that life gives to us, always appreciate it.
From above statements, I can safely draw conclusions that we can teach from our bad time because it helps us to gain confidence, success and positive attitude toward life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 398, Rule ID: TRY_AND[1]
Message: "Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "'try to'" is recommended for writing.
Suggestion: try to
...efore they reach success. Success means try and fail but never fail to try. Moreover,...
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Line 4, column 329, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eryone. I can understand everyone's behaviour and rules of a job. Someone sa...
^^
Line 4, column 369, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'Someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'saith', 'says'.
Suggestion: saith; says
... behaviour and rules of a job. Someone saying that 'In the middle of difficultie...
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Line 4, column 660, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'experiences'.
Suggestion: experiences
...d not try for it. To learn from someone experience is also good for us. Smoking causes can...
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Line 4, column 740, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: We
...causes cancer and other health problems.We get all sorts of lesions. Difficult exp...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, while, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1748.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 356.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91011235955 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00048916603 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553370786517 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 549.0 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.9039842322 48.9658058833 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.7407407407 100.406767564 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.1851851852 20.6045352989 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 5.45110844103 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16414029512 0.236089414692 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0408028794889 0.076458572812 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0954188063358 0.0737576698707 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0986017899527 0.150856017488 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116932459124 0.0645574589148 181% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.31 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.