pets are useful animals?
Some people state that pets are not useful animals while other individuls stand a very different ground. As far as, I am concerned, I vote for former choice that pets are really good for us. Let me explain my point of view.
Now humans live with pets, sleep with pets, eat with pets, stroll with pets. Keep it together is now trivial things. There are demographic division of children, adults and senior citizens enjoy company of pets. Sometimes parents cannot take care of their child due to hectic schedule of job, that time pet work as friend of a child. For epitome, a kid have a dog, he plays with it, sleep with it, even they eat together.
Another reason why I advocate an attitude of keeping pet is for an adult. Due to advancement of technology, burden of work on person’s shoulders are more than before. If an adult has pet, he or she can share worry with it, abridge stress by playing with it. In fast pace life, mostly no one have a time to meet friends. So pets help me as our best friend.
Moreover, most of owner of pets are senior citizens. When they face empty room, they feel lonely. They play with it, feed it, take care of it. Medical science says that pets can curtail blood pressure and heart diaease. For quintessence, my grandparents keep cat with them in my village. They feel light and enjoy company of cat. Furthermore, pets like parrot, cat, rabbit, cat, and dog play treasure in our life.
Every coin has two sides. Some people keep pets on their beds, they sleep with them, give them space on their couch. I conceive this is not good thing. We should keep utensils of pets separate, should do regular check up of pets. Sometime, guests feel thorny to enter in house due to pets. When we go outside, we should do arrangements for them. One person has to be occupied behind it. Due to emotional attachment with pets, when it die, family members could not come out from stress. In addition, now some people keep pets for show off not because of emotional attachment.
When taking into account of all these merits and drawbacks, i can safely draw conclusion that keeping pets with us is good but too much adore towards them is bad. Evey excess lead to be dangerous.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, moreover, really, so, while, as to, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1811.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 399.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53884711779 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46933824581 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28854307653 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 212.727598566 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59649122807 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.6003584229 150% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.1344086022 60% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.2691361545 48.9658058833 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 58.4193548387 100.406767564 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.8709677419 20.6045352989 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.22580645161 5.45110844103 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197685140207 0.236089414692 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0472145546398 0.076458572812 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0737212251822 0.0737576698707 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11186443873 0.150856017488 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.082493230536 0.0645574589148 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.4 11.7677419355 54% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 58.1214874552 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.1575268817 55% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.16 10.9000537634 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.88 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.0537634409 68% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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