you have recently moved to a different house.
Write a letter to a friend. In your letter
explain why you have moved
describe the new place
invite your friend to come and visit you.
Dear Ram,
I am doing great and hope you are also sailing in the same boat. I am writing this letter to tell you about my shifting to a new residence last week.
As you know, my last accommodation was on rent and it has been over a year that I was living there. While renewing the lease, my owner announced the sudden rise in the rental which was almost the double, so, after discussion with my family, they helped me in buying a flat.
The new apartment is located in the posh area with a lot of amenities such as indoor pool, gymnasium, club house etc. The neighbors are very cordial and they also invited me over the dinner as I do not have a gas connection and applied the same on my behalf. Although, I do not have any acquaintances here but with their assistance, i made good connections in my building and everyone here is very helpful and jovial <span class="hiddenSuggestion" pre="jovial "></span>.
I am organising a house-warming party next Saturday and the invitations have sent to all of our friends and I also want to you join us. Please spare a few extra days, as, there is a lot to catchup, since our last meeting.
I am looking forward to see you soon.
Yours truly,
Rupali Mahajan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 163, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...neighbors are very cordial and they also invited me over the dinner as I do not ...
^^
Line 7, column 196, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ey also invited me over the dinner as I do not have a gas connection and applied...
^^
Line 7, column 336, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ntances here but with their assistance, i made good connections in my building an...
^
Line 12, column 22, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to seeing'.
Suggestion: to seeing
...last meeting. I am looking forward to see you soon. Yours truly, Rupali M...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, while, such as, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1026.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 221.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64253393665 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.33717692995 2.54303337028 131% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633484162896 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 313.2 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.042191898 44.8134815571 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.2727272727 76.5299724578 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0909090909 16.8248392259 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.45454545455 4.34317383033 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178096482477 0.216113520407 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0708898465494 0.0766984524023 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0549178404288 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.098450151457 0.12726935374 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0461713569847 0.0580467560999 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.