University experience is more important than a university’s degree. Some people argue that university life is much more important than an educational degree in job market. Do you agree or not agree?
One of the most prominent trends in today's world is in thinking that the experience gained in the university is important than the degree. However, I am a proponent for university degree being the most important. In my opinion, this agreement requires serious acknowledgment about why the university degree is more important.
To begin with, there are myriads of arguments in favor of my stance, and the most preponderant one is the employer's outlook towards their candidate's achievements. The reason is recruiters will recruit an aspirant based on their knowledge, and the human resource officers do not select a candidate based on their university life. For example, most multinational corporations consider certain criteria for role choice, and the university degree remains the main reason. Therefore, the benefits of a university degree stand in good stead.
Another pivotal aspect of the proposition mentioned above is the universities offer practical training to the students. Besides, the teachers prepare students extensively to equip for their future endeavors, and the students receive accurate information for their excellence. For instance, engineering colleges offer extensive training on core subjects that recruiters seek for their organization. As a result, it is apparent why many are in favor of degrees.
In conclusion, the benefits of a university degree are too great to ignore because it reflects the skills and knowledge of a career aspirant.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 107, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'employers'' or 'employer's'?
Suggestion: employers'; employer's
...e, and the most preponderant one is the employers outlook towards their candidates achiev...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, look, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 31.9359605911 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1254.0 1207.87684729 104% => OK
No of words: 226.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54867256637 5.00649968141 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0788957483 2.71678728327 113% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 139.433497537 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592920353982 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 379.143842365 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.931034482759 430% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.9475797922 50.4703680194 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.5 104.977214359 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8333333333 20.9669160288 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.25397266985 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227109204223 0.242375264174 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0865164759705 0.0925447433944 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0749198551029 0.071462118173 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140558701365 0.151781067708 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0968018513968 0.0609392437508 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 12.6369458128 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 53.1260098522 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.91 11.5310837438 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.32886699507 116% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 55.0591133005 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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