You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job. (computer)
Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment. In your letter
• describe the problem with the equipment (cannot turn on, suddenly turn off while working last Wednesday)
• explain how this problem is affecting your work (heavy video encoding, can't work on laptop, late delivery)
• say what you want the shop or company to do (
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter with regard to some problems with my graphics card that I bought from your store 2 months ago.
I was using my computer to edit my customers' videos this Wednesday. Suddenly, my monitor turned black for 5 seconds and turned back on with the windows screen flashing. I then restarted my desktop, however, the problem persisted. Suspecting the graphics card was the cause, I tried plugging in my old graphics card and the computer worked again.
I supposed to deliver final edited videos to my clients last Friday. however, all my projects have postponed due to this problem. I tried using my laptop and my old graphics card but they are not powerful enough to complete heavy tasks. Now I have to apologize to my clients for the late delivery.
As I really need to finish my job in the shortest time, is it possible that you could temporarily send me another card while fixing mine? I would be very grateful and satisfied as your customer.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Kind regards
Truong
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-06-05 | drtruong92 | 78 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter with regard to ...
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Line 7, column 70, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...dited videos to my clients last Friday. however, all my projects have postponed due to ...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, look, really, second, so, then, while, i suppose, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 872.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7650273224 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48324433627 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.639344262295 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.8659568938 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.0769230769 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0769230769 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 4.34317383033 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183905601983 0.216113520407 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0648668799178 0.0766984524023 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0557500143267 0.0603063233224 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112397450357 0.12726935374 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0603745678123 0.0580467560999 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.79 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.