Crime is increasing at an alarming rate. What are the causes and solutions of this?
A matter of considerable controversy at present is the issue of crime which widely spread around the globe. This essay, I will discuss the reasons and the solutions to tackle this phenomenon.
To begin with, numerous factors are associated to upsurge the crime rate. However, the most prominent is, unemployment as younger ones has less job opportunities due to this they do some criminal acts to fulfill their towering of dreams. What is more, media also impacts on individuals mind which they try to implement the things in their lives, consequently, they become victim of illegal activities. For instance, blue wheal, a worldwide popular game which led to thousands of deaths in all over the world. Thus, crime is extensively spread.
Nevertheless, there are also few solutions to short out this problem. The first and foremost is, if government provide jobs after completed the studies, youngster can be encouraged about future and they decrease the stress about their future. Needless to say, parents should keep their eyes on their children which they should try to kids use social sites in under their supervision. Moreover, government should aware their nation people about consequences of criminal offences, it will be helpful to harness the crime.
To conclude, I firmly believe, unemployment as well as mass media increases crime. Undoubtedly, if government put some efforts, than crime can be handled.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 335, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'kid'.
Suggestion: kid
...their children which they should try to kids use social sites in under their supervi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, thus, well, for instance, as well as, to begin with, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1198.0 1207.87684729 99% => OK
No of words: 227.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27753303965 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79113046705 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 139.433497537 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.656387665198 0.580463131201 113% => OK
syllable_count: 358.2 379.143842365 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.872729118 50.4703680194 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.1538461538 104.977214359 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4615384615 20.9669160288 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2307692308 7.25397266985 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 2.75862068966 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180901218204 0.242375264174 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0694616029656 0.0925447433944 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.054823254078 0.071462118173 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118521057002 0.151781067708 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0541040234802 0.0609392437508 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.1260098522 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 11.5310837438 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 55.0591133005 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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