The position of women in society has changed markedly in the last twenty years. Many of the problems young people now experience, such as juvenile delinquency, arise from the fact that many married women now work and are not at home to care for their children.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
You should write at least 250 words.
In society, contribution of women have increased tremendously since last two decades as governments and many organisations tried hard to level up the women empowerment. Few people believe that the upbringing of children are not taken care of as mothers are unable to pay attention to their children as a result many problems are faced by young like juvenile felony. However, I do not accord with this notion as proper upbringing is not solo moral responsibility of mothers.
As women have started working, it is quite obvious that children will receive less care from their mothers compare to our past, when women were treated as house-wife only. These days various options are available to take care of our children, when both parents are working. For instance, day-child care is a well known facility that many working parents are adopting. In facts, day-care institute do care more than their parents as their business depend on quality service. Secondly, attachment between grandparents and grandchildren have increased as grandparents take care of their grandchildren, while parents are working in the day. As a result, I would say, family bonding become more stronger, and it would be totally baseless if we blame their mothers if any thing goes wrong. Fathers are equally responsible to take care of his children.
Teenagers experience many issues because of wrong schooling, unethical friend circles, and too much pamper from parents. If parents compromise in their schooling to save few bucks, it is quite natural that their education level at school would be poor as quality service has a price and school will definitely charge more if their education standard is high. Secondly, today's parents show affection towards his/her child in more sophisticated way i.e. they offer their children whatever they want. Moreover, parents never scold on their children if they commit similar over and over again intentionally. As a result, young never think twice before committing any crime like stealing money as they have started believing that parents will never take any action if they get caught. Should we blame only women for this as they are working?
To sum up, though time contribution of women in upbringing their children have reduced compare to past, but it is the moral responsibility of both parents to take care of their children.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 686, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'stronger' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: stronger
...ult, I would say, family bonding become more stronger, and it would be totally baseless if we...
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Line 3, column 763, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[2]
Message: Did you mean 'anything'?
Suggestion: anything
...y baseless if we blame their mothers if any thing goes wrong. Fathers are equally respons...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, while, for instance, in fact, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1974.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 382.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16753926702 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72612024429 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539267015707 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 615.6 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 2.10420841683 380% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8697772183 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.117647059 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4705882353 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35294117647 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195158042673 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.070243575074 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518809513512 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132170860341 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0412249970792 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.