Write about the following topic:
Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
In the last century, the advent of computer has done wonders for human beings in every aspect. Therefore, I strongly agree that the role of computer is vital and stands out of other inventions in this digital age.
It is undeniable that nowadays, with an Internet-accessed computer, people can easily connect with the others in distant places without paying expensive cost. For example, students are able to discuss and do assignments with their friends conveniently via a laptop screen whenever they want without going out and suffering from wet or sweltering weather. Thanks to this function, friends get on better with each other and their studies become faster and cheaper.
Moreover, computer is a wonderful tool with the ability to access and store a large amount of information of various fields. People from all walks of life can reach this vivid source of knowledge to discover whatever they want. For instance, to update the lastest news, we can go on Google or several websites of the press. Not only can we read but some sites also provide us lively images or videos related to the topic so that we can understand the situation clearly. This function also gives the poor ample opportunities to have the proper schooling like attending in some online classes with a lot lower fee.
In conclusion, computer provides every individual the chance to interact with the others and the ability to access enormous up-to-date sources of information. Although it still has several negative influences if being abused, we should utilize it properly to make the benefits outweigh the drawbacks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1342.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10266159696 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67103703423 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650190114068 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.2502374159 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 111.833333333 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9166666667 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148574990077 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0537271585415 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0293973521936 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0918611448604 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0390181463632 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.