. Personal Development is the base for professional development and advancing in one’s career. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Of late, there has been a colossal upsurge among the prodigies discussing the fact that professional development requires personal development to achieve success in one’s career. In my opinion, this statement is more realistic and worth to believe. In this essay, I shall highlight some of the important aspects of this essay before deducing a final conclusion.
At the outset, there are myriad of arguments discussing the fact the professional career needs personal development for accomplishment of the desire goals. Firstly, the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that character building, honesty, sacrifice and the difference between right and wrong make personal life more strong to build professional career. As a prime example, according the to department of psychology, human brain has the ability to mold itself, when adapt for certain changes that are either positive or negative and these positive changes are efficient for the final production.
Another pivotal facet pertaining to this argument is that professional development requires skilled and polished brains that only develops with proficient personal development. Moreover, it also acquires person to achieve success in his career.
To recapitulate, foregoing discussion propounds that personal development is not beneficial for professional career but also favourable for the achievement of success in one’s professional career. Therefore, ideas that will bring benefits would be cordially welcomed.
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...g benefits would be cordially welcomed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, therefore, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 31.9359605911 81% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 5.75862068966 226% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1278.0 1207.87684729 106% => OK
No of words: 219.0 242.827586207 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.83561643836 5.00649968141 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05914263518 2.71678728327 113% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 139.433497537 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611872146119 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 379.143842365 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.4189539797 50.4703680194 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.8 104.977214359 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9 20.9669160288 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.9 7.25397266985 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.342160456075 0.242375264174 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135296727398 0.0925447433944 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.128612818532 0.071462118173 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224205110793 0.151781067708 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0456712162257 0.0609392437508 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 12.6369458128 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 53.1260098522 63% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.59 11.5310837438 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.8 8.32886699507 118% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 55.0591133005 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.5123152709 162% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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