Some people prefer to live in a house, while others feel that there are more prons to living in an apartment. Are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in a house compared with living in an apartment?
It has been argued that few individuals choose a house to live, however, others believe that flat living is exceedingly beneficial than houses. Although living in flats might bring some positive aspects, I am of the opinion that houses far outweighs flats in terms of benefits.
Admittedly, there are some minor advantages to staying in apartments. First of all, they are cheaper to rent and maintain. The maintenance costs are mostly paid by building administration such as any problem with the systems or most of the wear and tear. Then the size of flats is smaller as compared to houses which gives an advantage of affordable rents. Secondly, some apartments offer sky-high views which might overlook the breathtaking sceneries such as oceans or forests. Penthouse apartments located on the top floor of high rise buildings are famous for offering panoramic views of the surrounding areas which are not quite possible in houses. It is one of the key aspect considered by some people to adopt the apartment lifestyle.
Nevertheless, despite the benefits above, I believe it is significantly advantageous to live in a house. The most key aspect of it is the ownership of land. Land comes with houses and it is very important because, in case of any disaster such as fire or demolition of the structure, the land will still be intact. Furthermore, land always appreciates in value regardless of any other factor. For instance, a lot of investors find land as the best safe bet for their investment. Apartments, on the other hand, does not offer any land. In addition, there is a lot of room available to design or remodel the house. Designs such as beachfront houses are the few amenities which cannot be offered to apartment residents. Then there is no restriction on structural changes of the house but for apartments, the structure is not allowed to be changed in any way as the building might get weaker because of this remodeling.
In conclusion, while apartments might bring lower costs and better views, I believe benefits of choosing house exceeds the advantages of apartments as houses offer land and independence of renovation which leads to a better living experience.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, look, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, still, then, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1825.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 364.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01373626374 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88271915697 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535714285714 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 568.8 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3872538075 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0526315789 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1578947368 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.57894736842 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249183654762 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.070732016643 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0740033670421 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163706478986 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0594861958146 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.