Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Confidence and respect are the basics foundations of any relationship. They are reached when the truth is always said no matter the consequences. Personally, I believe that telling the truth is crucial in our daily lives and relationships. I feel this way for the following reasons.
Firstly, we can demonstrate regret when we tell the truth after had lied. When the truth is said even after a lie we can prove that we have nothing to hidden, we are willing to apologize and fix what is wrong. Otherwise, if we did not reveal the fact, the problem will be getting bigger and bigger because another lie needs to be said to continue the first one. For example, when my sister was a child, she did not want to tell my mother that she has got a low grade in a test. She did not tell my mother the truth and apologize for it, in contrast, she hid two teacher’s letters from my mom until the principal’s school call to her and explain everything. Consequently, my sister was without TV for weeks not because of the low grade but because she lied twice to mom.
Secondly, telling the truth shows the character of a person if someone is known as a liar probably no one believes him to have a relationship. Trust is necessary for every relation such as work relations, love relations, business relations and even family relations. My own experience demonstrates this concept, last year when my father was looking for someone to take care of our garden he did not contract a man that had lied to him another occasion about the price of a tree and other materials. This is because if he lied once he probably would lie again and the confidence of my father in him was broken. The man has never admitted his error even apologize, as a result, my father and other clients never call him again to do garden work.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that the truth has always to be said and is crucial in every relationship. This is because being honest we prove we feel sorry after had told a lie, and because it is related to a person’s character.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 69, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'lain'.
Suggestion: lain
...regret when we tell the truth after had lied. When the truth is said even after a li...
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Line 5, column 424, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'lain'.
Suggestion: lain
...rden he did not contract a man that had lied to him another occasion about the price...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, for example, i feel, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1687.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 371.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54716981132 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71794895696 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.485175202156 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 528.3 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9504281937 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.2352941176 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8235294118 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.45110844103 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0815374584741 0.236089414692 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.03788366397 0.076458572812 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.036755012531 0.0737576698707 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0692268153991 0.150856017488 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0457721066763 0.0645574589148 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.11 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.02 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 86.8835125448 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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