You have recently ordered a book online, but the book was delayed and has not arrived yet. Write a letter to the company manager and say
– Give the details of your order.
– Explain why you need the book urgently.
– Suggest a solution for the situation.
Dear Sir,
My name is James and I am a regular customer of your online book store. Last Sunday dated 12th May,I had placed an order for the Novel " You Can Win" and my order number was ABZ2256. The estimated time of delivery shown on your website was within 2-3 days. I am sorry to say that I still not received the book, I had placed the order for.
I have planned a surprise gift in the form of this book to my son on his 15th birthday on 18th May. So it is very urgent and important to get this on time. This book is suitable for his age group. This book will help him to stay motivated and help to develop problem solving approach in life.
I request you if you could please track my order number and send the same through speed post or fast courier, so that I may get my order before 18th May. Looking forward for your prompt actions on this in anticipation. For any further information please feel free to contact me at 772103381238
Yours Sincerely,
James
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 99, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, may, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 800.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.34782608696 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23543384184 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.635869565217 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 234.0 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.054770939 44.8134815571 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.7272727273 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7272727273 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.18181818182 4.34317383033 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260256725201 0.216113520407 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.094082376044 0.0766984524023 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0524235129521 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167200771627 0.12726935374 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0529428765117 0.0580467560999 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.65 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.0 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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