Many people believe that it’s better to learn something in a group rather than individually. Do you agree or disagree?

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...ople are proactive to learn new things. some people prefers doing this in group ,whi...
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... some people prefers doing this in group ,while others find it comfortable learnin...
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...thers find it comfortable learning alone .I believe in the former notion that grou...
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...ers find it comfortable learning alone .I believe in the former notion that group...
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...p learning is better because it not only makes an individual social and motivated...
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...iads of benefits of learning in a cohort .Firstly ,it improves our social life whi...
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...enefits of learning in a cohort .Firstly ,it improves our social life which indire...
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...etter by ensuring our mental stability. when a person is engaged with people around ...
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...n a person is engaged with people around ,who shares similar interest for learnin...
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...erson is engaged with people around ,who shares similar interest for learning any...
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...terest for learning any particular thing ,they discuss their worries ,querries, an...
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...icular thing ,they discuss their worries ,querries, and try to get rid of their fa...
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...lacies with the help of their colleagues .Meeting regularly with people also helps...
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...cies with the help of their colleagues .Meeting regularly with people also helps them t...
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...to normalize their performance pressure, boost their confidence, and avoid bored...
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...sure, boost their confidence, and avoid boredom and loneliness .For example ,whi...
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...dence, and avoid boredom and loneliness .For example ,while learning french langu...
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...nce, and avoid boredom and loneliness .For example ,while learning french language...
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...oid boredom and loneliness .For example ,while learning french language I started...
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...ning french language I started on my own .It was really boring and I lost interest...
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...ng french language I started on my own .It was really boring and I lost interest i...
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...and the tutor made it easy to understand . Secondly , there is always a healthy...
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...made it easy to understand . Secondly , there is always a healthy competition a...
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...yone focused, enthusiastic and motivated .To exemplify ,while preparing for post g...
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... had enrolled myself into group tuitions ,wherein we use to appear for tests every...
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...in we use to appear for tests every week,and each one had a determination to score h...
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...etermination to score highest marks. We use to enjoy that spirit and it definitely ...
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...ely made a difference in our final exams .This makes it clear that group learning ...
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...y made a difference in our final exams .This makes it clear that group learning is a...
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...t mindset and intellectual skills gather together ,there is always sharing of tho...
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...and intellectual skills gather together ,there is always sharing of thoughts .Eve...
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...her ,there is always sharing of thoughts .Every individual carries some valuable i...
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...which cannot happen while learning alone .To illustrate, in group discussions pup...
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...ich cannot happen while learning alone .To illustrate, in group discussions pupil...
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...one .To illustrate, in group discussions pupils contribute their views on same t...
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...e is exchange of facts. In conclusion ,group learning is good for socializing e...
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...agement and expanding one's horizon .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, really, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, thus, while, for example, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1834.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37829912023 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7646067166 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639296187683 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 565.2 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 119.030290263 49.4020404114 241% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 183.4 106.682146367 172% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.1 20.7667163134 164% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 43.0 5.01903807615 857% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171374105973 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0767386613502 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.061093584828 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111841691735 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0714160173773 0.056905535591 125% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.0 13.0946893788 160% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.51 50.2224549098 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 11.3001002004 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.52 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.77 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 10.7795591182 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.