Nowadays shops have extended opening hours almost every day of the week in many countries. Is it a positive or negative development for shoppers and local community?
These days people buying behavior pattern is change and shops offer lots of benefit to their consumer and that prospective many part of the world has been open for long hours. Although there is some adverse effects in the people life of the owner and staff, but overall it will be beneficial for economic development both business owners and society.
To begin with, there are lot of advantage of the store owners for opening long hours is increasing the sales and give the attractive offer to them, so they can visit the stores anytime. For that long hours specially benefited to the service class people. In modern time there is perfect competition for all the products and commodities, so seller who will meet the demand in better way can only survive in this competitive world.For exemplify big cities and metro in india government passed the rule for extended opening hours for 24 hours.
Moving further, Increase in opening timings has significant importance for the community growth. For example, employee are working in shifts, so many will be able to find the job and living standard will grow into the various aspects of their life . As sellers profit will be grow and they will be paying more taxes to the government. Which can used by the local authorities for various community development activities and income received from different sources and tax is one of the major source of income.
Too sum up with, opening hours of the retail outlets are increasing in current years and it also help the local community to develop in many ways and contribution to their economy to reach at good prospective level . Business mans are also earning more profit and fight with healthy competition for international stores.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, for example, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1441.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95189003436 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52872696041 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587628865979 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.4436515358 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.0 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4545454545 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.09090909091 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230865626242 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0880404684691 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475233375306 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138380908556 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0120554182906 0.056905535591 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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