Some people think to lower the maximum speed on all roads can make road saver ,
some think there are another way. Discuss on both views and give your opinion.
Nowadays, over speed became one of the critical reasons in traffic accident. Some people believed that to lower the maximum speed on all roads could be beneficial for road safety, some others say there are a better way to keep road safe.
To begin, all the speed limit regulation should be regularly examined by the police department according to the crash and death rate on all the road. The speed limit should be reduced in certain areas. Especially in the CBD and the school zoon. During these areas, there are many pedestrians on the street, lower speed can make driver pay more attention on surrounding, they can make a quicker responding.
However, if the same top speed limit applied for all roads, it will damage the traffic efficiency. Different speed limit has their own capacity design for different types of roads. That is why moto way speed limit can up to 130km/h or even no limitation in Germen. Furthermore, driver’s behaviour should be considered as the road safety reason as well. People using mobile phone while driving the vehicle also caused many serious crash to death. Higher pulishment should be applied to this behaviour to reduce the traffic accident rate.
Besides, there are new technology for the driving assistant to keep road safe, such as auto break, self-drive system. Active safe driving tech has been involved into driver’s behavior more and more.
In conclusion, I would like to say that to lower speed limit can maximise the road safety in certain areas. At the same time, automatical driving innovation technologh also provide a better option to protect the pedestrians on the street without any impact to the traffice efficiency.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, if, so, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1078.0 1615.20841683 67% => OK
No of words: 218.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94495412844 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42892331716 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596330275229 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 332.1 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.9557388645 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.9230769231 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7692307692 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.07692307692 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285616881083 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0957250243202 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0985667141157 0.0667982634062 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16452370536 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0999127854984 0.056905535591 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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