Internet and media plays a very vital role in public sphere in today's world. Information transfer and reaching to mass has been comparatively easy though digital media and internet. There was time when people used to get the news relatively very late than today. Internet and mass media seems to have solved that problem. But these steaming industry has seeded many unwanted problem in the society.
Internet news streaming media has focused more on reaching the wide range of public in less time but they generally fail to put detail in events. News in shorts has become as popular tradition in the generation. This has resulted in short span of reading time. Reading habit among non-readers has further decreased. People who read news paper has more unintterupted reading time resulting in better attention. Many unwanted problem in the society is result of people not enough time to read stories completely. But being connected to social media has they tend to react to many such stories without being completely aware of it. This kind of behavior incite reaction from other which eventually lead to trending stories in internet.
People do want to focus on one task but lack of patience and dedication to one task taught by news paper reading habit eventually
helps in long run. New generation looks for news of their interest for better domain knowledge and recent tradition surely help in the same. Some people want to start a business related to irrigation technology needs to spend more time reading such kind of articles. Some particular T.V. Channel or some online streaming news channel provide same kind of services to nurture their viewers need. This kind of subtle habit has led people excel in their own domain beyond imagination.
Every generation has it own challenges and advantages. The contemparary generation has learnt to live in environment where information is flowing form all kind of sources. They eventually have to create a filter to accept information that will lead to better domain expertise. People will eventually need to make better decision to progress well in life. Such ability is developed when we make ourselves more equipped with knowledge and expertise.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'newspaper'? This word sequence is usually spelled together.
Suggestion: newspaper
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Line 6, column 95, Rule ID: NEWS_PAPER[1]
Message: Did you mean 'newspaper'? This word sequence is usually spelled together.
Suggestion: newspaper
...ce and dedication to one task taught by news paper reading habit eventually helps in long...
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Message: Did you mean 'owns'?
Suggestion: owns
...magination. Every generation has it own challenges and advantages. The contempa...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... eventually need to make better decision to progress well in life. Such ability i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, well, in short, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 19.5258426966 36% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 33.0505617978 48% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1847.0 2235.4752809 83% => OK
No of words: 361.0 442.535393258 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1163434903 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56879172467 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 215.323595506 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548476454294 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 581.4 704.065955056 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.2484922729 60.3974514979 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.3043478261 118.986275619 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6956521739 23.4991977007 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.82608695652 5.21951772744 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199523764444 0.243740707755 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.055239870335 0.0831039109588 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448537064058 0.0758088955206 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108752246738 0.150359130593 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0340046545727 0.0667264976115 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 14.1392134831 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 48.8420337079 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 12.1639044944 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 100.480337079 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.