A lot of developing countries rely on tourism to boost economy what are the advantages and disadvantages of tourism to local people
Tourism plays an indispensable role for development of the nations by supporting them financially as well as socially.However,this notion has both pros and cons which the upcoming paragraphs aim to highlight.
To begin with, the main advantage of widespread presences of tourism is publicizing local culture that is traditional things, cuisine etcetera which tends to produce more opportunities to earn money for native people. Apart from this, tourism will help to decline the local pollution as more number of jobs in tourist industry decreases the need of building other industries and owing to this reason tourism is known as non-smog industry.
On the flip side, there are some drawbacks of prevalence tourism. Imbalance of trade is main one. The developed tourism will engage more number pf people towards it which affects other business and trades due to lack of mortals in those business. Moreover, it also causes "drain of brain" as people easily get jobs in this industry without any specific qualification and experience which encourage them not to get qualified. Hence, it weakens their intellectual as well as cognitive abilities.
To close , prevalence of tourism has both bane and boon. Hence, countries should not completely relied on this for their economic growth
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, moreover, so, well, apart from, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1097.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 203.0 315.596192385 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4039408867 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03112062343 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.650246305419 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 337.5 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.7036261287 49.4020404114 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.7 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.3 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23873311913 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0836306698203 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517180322177 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135027522507 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0312018403776 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.