Q What are the threats to environment in the present times What can individuals and government do to prevent such abuses to nature

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Q.What are the threats to environment in the present times?What can individuals and government do to prevent such abuses to nature?

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We live in the 21th century, at in this century environment has been dirty day by day. There are different type of threat to environment such as pollution,deforeste,climate change etc. But, we can pevent our environment by individuals and government activities.

First of all, pollution is the biggest threats to environment. 21th century is the develop century and in this era, we have lots of industry. Industry escape their wastage water into the sea or river. And that water we use to be for our daily routin life. That water also used by animals and they loss their...

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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ANS… We live in the 21th century, at in this ...
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... threat to environment such as pollution,deforeste,climate change etc. But, we can pevent ...
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...dividuals and government activities. First of all, pollution is the biggest t...
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...threats to environment. 21th century is the develop century and in this era, we have lots ...
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...ent. 21th century is the develop century and in this era, we have lots of industr...
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...nto the sea or river. And that water we use to be for our daily routin life. That w...
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...n harmful things to the environment. Howeve, today’s world growing at a very ...
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...pact directly on to the environment. On the other side, we can prevent or red...
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...es at our home or at open landscape. Conclusively, I would like to say that, ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'so', 'then', 'after all', 'such as', 'first of all']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.280405405405 0.247107183377 113% => OK
Verbs: 0.128378378378 0.155533422707 83% => OK
Adjectives: 0.097972972973 0.0946595960268 104% => OK
Adverbs: 0.027027027027 0.0501214627716 54% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0709459459459 0.0437548338989 162% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.111486486486 0.122226691241 91% => OK
Participles: 0.0168918918919 0.0403226058552 42% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 3.08967549664 2.80594681477 110% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0236486486486 0.0326793684256 72% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0574324324324 0.0861772015684 67% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0304054054054 0.021408717616 142% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00337837837838 0.011925033212 28% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1626.0 1933.35771543 84% => OK
No of words: 260.0 316.048096192 82% => OK
Chars per words: 6.25384615385 6.12580529183 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20517956788 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.319230769231 0.374742101984 85% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.234615384615 0.28420135186 83% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.157692307692 0.203846283523 77% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.130769230769 0.137316102897 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08967549664 2.80594681477 110% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.037074148 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588461538462 0.56093040696 105% => OK
Word variations: 61.0531758569 60.7387585426 101% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0891783567 124% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.7743622355 63% => OK
Sentence length SD: 18.9404329412 49.517814964 38% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.3 127.492653851 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.0 20.7743622355 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.45 0.814263465372 55% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 3.99599198397 225% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 36.4615384615 49.1944974215 74% => OK
Elegance: 1.80597014925 1.69124875643 107% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34290121185 0.332605444948 103% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0937840985764 0.102741220458 91% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.08008299125 0.0668466124924 120% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.49270272768 0.534860350844 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.121956927653 0.148594505496 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123094029585 0.134430193775 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0824541286708 0.0742795772207 111% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.212945308991 0.324371583561 66% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0535255303749 0.0638462369009 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211232488457 0.228012699653 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.048947476835 0.058150111329 84% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.68436873747 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.41683366733 176% => OK
Positive topic words: 1.0 5.90881763527 17% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.5751503006 155% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 1.9629258517 153% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 10.4468937876 77% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Going through the frequency of subject-verb disagreement and spelling mistakes made every often in this essay does not contrast with the band awarded by e-grader. This essay does not deserve more than 5.5 out of 9.

I am really sorry for the writer but as a teacher I want to be honest with a student.