Sedentary lifestyle has devastated the lives of millennial's
Sedentary lifestyle has devastated the lives of millennia’s by impacting their physical and mental health to a greater extent. However, section of people believe that drastic change in the way of living has changed from traditional household to modern culture.
In modernized era, people have adapted technologically advanced and comfortable life with dependency on assisted devices from traditional ways followed at the time of our ancestors which were manually operated. This subsequently has made the present generation lethargic and dependent. To showcase a noticeable difference in their lives, initiation has to be taken in upbringing of the children right from the childhood till adulthood. incorporating children in activity based games facilitates their physical well-being and ability to solve, enhances the mental capacity. Moreover, teaching them values of life and promoting sports as an essential/indispensable activity in school will contribute to alleviate health hazards.
In my opinion, government authorities should actively involve youth in incorporating community health awareness programs in form of live plays, seminars, camps to educate the local community about the various health issues prevailing in every arena.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, well, as to, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 10.5418719212 28% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 20.9802955665 38% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1080.0 1207.87684729 89% => OK
No of words: 179.0 242.827586207 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.03351955307 5.00649968141 121% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.92707691288 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.34383560312 2.71678728327 123% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 139.433497537 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.703910614525 0.580463131201 121% => OK
syllable_count: 342.9 379.143842365 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.57093596059 121% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6551724138 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.8496176013 50.4703680194 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.0 104.977214359 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.375 20.9669160288 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.25397266985 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.12807881773 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110398715638 0.242375264174 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0496507305457 0.0925447433944 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0982109167525 0.071462118173 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0929456773816 0.151781067708 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105441044296 0.0609392437508 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 12.6369458128 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 23.77 53.1260098522 45% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.9458128079 141% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.99 11.5310837438 156% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.99 8.32886699507 132% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 55.0591133005 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.94827586207 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 200 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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