In the modern world, children are affected by obesity at the alarming rate. Many disease attacked on the children nowdays while in past it was seen in the adults. Overweight is the main problem. There are several reasons and solutions of this plethora problem. I will illustrate both the points in upcoming passages.
To begin with, I want to indicate that main reason is the fast food because it increase fat in childrens. Children ate so junk food because it is made in a few minutes and it is delicious in taste. When both parents are working, they do not look after their child diet. Mostly children are too indulged with indoor games which do not burn calories. Obesity cause so many other problem like chestrol and problem in taking breath. Students easily buy fast food from the school cafeteria.
We can observed that, for solve this plethora there are some solutions. First of all, parents took a eye on the diet of their child. Parents gave advice to their children to avoid junk food. They inspired them to play outdoor games like football, hockey, criket and so on. Parents offer a home made food to their kids.
To sum up, overweight is a major problem in modern kids. In my perspective, burn of calories is so important for decline the overwight. Fast food outlets do not give junk food to kids without their parents. Schools and parents motivated to child take part in practical games. Schools only provide healthy food in their canteen.
- Many people believe it is the school’s responsibility to teach children not to eat junk food. Others believe parents should do this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 56
- These days many people leave their country to work abroad and take their family with them. Do you think benefits of this outweigh disadvantages in terms of family development? 73
- The two bar charts illustrate the change that took place between 1970 and 2000 in relation to marriage status amongst American adults. 56
- Modern children are suffering from the diseases that were once considered to be meant for adults only. Obesity is a major disease prevalent among children. What are its causes and what solutions can be offered? 56
- The media is increasing interest in famous people who have ordinary backgrounds. Why do you think people are interested in the lives of famous people? Do you think this is a good thing? 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 77, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun disease seems to be countable; consider using: 'Many diseases'.
Suggestion: Many diseases
...fected by obesity at the alarming rate. Many disease attacked on the children nowdays while ...
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Line 3, column 80, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'increases'?
Suggestion: increases
...main reason is the fast food because it increase fat in childrens. Children ate so junk ...
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Line 5, column 8, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'observe'
Suggestion: observe
...od from the school cafeteria. We can observed that, for solve this plethora there are...
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Line 5, column 100, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...e solutions. First of all, parents took a eye on the diet of their child. Parents...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, look, so, while, first of all, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1208.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75590551181 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34473857724 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590551181102 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 365.4 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 16.3604522888 49.4020404114 33% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 57.5238095238 106.682146367 54% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.0952380952 20.7667163134 58% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.95238095238 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119232565679 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0354491119123 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0397383527607 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0781603093215 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0408442400555 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 13.0946893788 53% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 50.2224549098 152% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 11.3001002004 50% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.44 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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