Some people feel that children should be educated in in single-sex schools; others argue that mixed schools are better.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
People have different views concerning whether children should be joined by unisex schools. While there is some truth in claiming that mixed schools are superior. Personally, I believe that mixed schools would be better. Allow me to elaborate in the below essay.
On the one hand, there would be two principal reasons why single-sex schools are preferable. First and foremost, mono-sex schools are matching with certain countries’ customs and traditions. one particularly salient example is the schooling system of saudi arabia, where the single-sex school system is greatly recommended by the saudi community. Moreover, some sensitive children are liable to be embarrassed when deal or meet with other different sex colleagues, it is, thus, recommended to isolate between both sexes of those shamed children.
On the other hand, I would side with those who suppose that the mixed schools are better, and I believe that it is healthy for the optimal raising of youngsters, in order that they could live their normal life; in addition, it could improve their cognitive and mental abilities.
Furthermore, if parents were having a son and daughter, it would be more convenient to admit them in the same school. For instance, I have one friend in saudi arabia who has to collect his son from one school and collect his daughter from another school because only of the sex variation. Consequently, he has to pay the extra money and spend extra time which is substantially added burden on his shoulders.
By way of conclusion, it seems to me that the benefits of mixed schools such as convenience and healthy future life would eclipse other merits of single-sex schools.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, thus, while, as to, for instance, in addition, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1414.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17948717949 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76418712354 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586080586081 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.505573716 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.769230769 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.61538461538 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319296463421 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11458869171 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.074555967731 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175315980505 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0930567238714 0.056905535591 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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