"Manned space flight is costly and dangerous. Moreover, the recent success of a series of unmanned space probes and satellites has demonstrated that a great deal of useful information can be gathered without the costs and risks associated with sending men and women into space. Therefore, we should invest our resources in unmanned space flight."
The above recommends that manned space flight is costly as well as risky and we should invest our resources in unmanned space flight.This arguement is rife with holes and is bolstered by some unsubstantiated assumptions and is unpersuasive as it stands.
In the past decade the use technology has skyrocketed and plethora of advancements are made in it. The first libe of the argument states that manned space flight is coslty as well as dangerous. This statement is vague and mysterious as no evidence is provided regarding the cost difference in manned and unmanned space flights. Also no incidents are attached to prove that manned space fligts is dangerous. Space crafts are created and manufctured by men/women and they have intricate details regarding the functionality of each component.
The second line states that in recent unmanned space probes many useful information was gathered.But it nowhere mentions that manned space flights didn't discover useful information.It also states that manned space fligts possess a great risk without any documents attached to it regarding previous incidents.Rather if a man is travelling on a space flight and something goes wrong then it can be controlled by the person travelling on the space craft.If we send an unmanned space craft and some problems occur in the system then the whole space flight would go out of control which possess a great risk of cost.
The last sentence of the arguement asserts that we should invest more resources in unmanned space craft.This statement is vague as the preceding statements aren't bolstered with legitimate proofs and documents.Without proper research one should not invest resources as it could have detrimental effects on the space flights.
Therefore, there aren't enough statistics or proper research results to agree with the above arguement. If the editor of the National Aeronautics magazine would have buttressed the arguement with some real life incidents rather than theoritical explanation then we could conclude of investing more resources in unmanned space flights.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2023-08-23 | Krisha Lakhani | 58 | view |
| 2023-08-17 | riyarmy | 83 | view |
| 2023-08-11 | Anish Sapkota | 58 | view |
| 2023-08-04 | DCAD123 | 50 | view |
| 2023-07-30 | BusariMoruf | 55 | view |
- The following appeared in a letter to the editor of Parson City's local newspaper."In our region of Trillura, the majority of money spent on the schools that most students attend — the city-run public schools — comes from taxes that each city governme 63
- The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition. Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disa 50
- The following is a recommendation from the Board of Directors of Monarch Books."We recommend that Monarch Books open a café in its store. Monarch, having been in business at the same location for more than twenty years, has a large customer base because 59
- Scandals are useful because they focus our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be 50
- Society should make efforts to save endangered species only if the potential extinction of those species is the result of human activities.Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take. 66
Comments
Essay evaluation report
samples:
https://www.testbig.com/gmatgre-essays/following-opinion-was-provided-l…
----------------------------
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 11 15
No. of Words: 337 350
No. of Characters: 1719 1500
No. of Different Words: 169 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.285 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.101 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.738 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 131 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 90 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 75 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 52 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 30.636 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 20.406 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.818 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.403 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.667 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.132 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 134, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
... our resources in unmanned space flight.This arguement is rife with holes and is bol...
^^^^
Line 3, column 274, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...as no evidence is provided regarding the cost difference in manned and unmanned s...
^^
Line 3, column 330, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...e in manned and unmanned space flights. Also no incidents are attached to prove that...
^^^^
Line 5, column 61, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun information seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much useful information', 'a good deal of useful information'.
Suggestion: much useful information; a good deal of useful information
...es that in recent unmanned space probes many useful information was gathered.But it nowhere mentions th...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 98, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: But
...es many useful information was gathered.But it nowhere mentions that manned space f...
^^^
Line 5, column 148, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...here mentions that manned space flights didnt discover useful information.It also sta...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 182, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
...ights didnt discover useful information.It also states that manned space fligts po...
^^
Line 5, column 309, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Rather
...ched to it regarding previous incidents.Rather if a man is travelling on a space fligh...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 309, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Rather,
...ched to it regarding previous incidents.Rather if a man is travelling on a space fligh...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 452, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: If
...he person travelling on the space craft.If we send an unmanned space craft and som...
^^
Line 7, column 105, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
... more resources in unmanned space craft.This statement is vague as the preceding sta...
^^^^
Line 7, column 157, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: aren't
...nt is vague as the preceding statements arent bolstered with legitimate proofs and do...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 210, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Without
...ed with legitimate proofs and documents.Without proper research one should not invest r...
^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 18, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: aren't
... the space flights. Therefore, there arent enough statistics or proper research re...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 104, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ults to agree with the above arguement. If the editor of the National Aeronautics ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, regarding, second, so, then, therefore, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.6327345309 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.9520958084 62% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 11.1786427146 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 13.6137724551 59% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 28.8173652695 80% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 55.5748502994 67% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 16.3942115768 79% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1754.0 2260.96107784 78% => OK
No of words: 326.0 441.139720559 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38036809816 5.12650576532 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.56307096286 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96721392267 2.78398813304 107% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 204.123752495 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515337423313 0.468620217663 110% => OK
syllable_count: 540.0 705.55239521 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59920159681 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.96107784431 81% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.76447105788 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 19.7664670659 51% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 22.8473053892 140% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 155.744823349 57.8364921388 269% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 175.4 119.503703932 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.6 23.324526521 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8 5.70786347227 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.25449101796 285% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.20758483034 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 6.88822355289 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.67664670659 43% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.363618955435 0.218282227539 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134914710405 0.0743258471296 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100106929834 0.0701772020484 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198793652807 0.128457276422 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106158074361 0.0628817314937 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.2 14.3799401198 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.54 48.3550499002 63% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.0 12.197005988 139% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.52 12.5979740519 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.32208582834 108% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 98.500998004 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 12.3882235529 89% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 11.1389221557 133% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.9071856287 126% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.