International tourism has become one of the biggest industries in the world. Some people think it unfortunately causes tension rather than understanding between peoples from different cultures. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Nowadays, tourism has strongly developed and become one of the main drives for the economies of many countries. In particular, international tourism has played an important role in culture exchanges between countries. However, there are concerns that the flows of foreign visitors bring more tension to the destination countries. In my opinion, I would rather disagree with it because of the following reasons.
First, by traveling abroad and visiting other countries and territories, people can experience and feel the real life and cultures of the places they visit. As a proverb says:”seeing is believing”, the true scene will definitely has a long-lasting impact on a person. For instance, an American traveler may join a tour to visit a historic prison using during the Vietnam war, so he can have a clear image of how fierce and scary the war is. It would be more influential to him compared with the photos or books he has read about that war.
On the other hand, the governments usually organize the tourism promotion campaigns to attract and increase the number of the foreign visitors. Those activities will help to spread the image of people and culture of each country worldwide. By this way, everyone will have the opportunities to approach and get familiar with various cultures around the world.
Overall, I would say that I am convinced by the advantages of international tourism in term of encouraging the understanding between countries, even though there are still some people hold that it leads to a great deal of tension.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: have
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...at it leads to a great deal of tension.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, so, still, for instance, in particular, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1307.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12549019608 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99177393279 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627450980392 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7635371778 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.916666667 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.08333333333 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159355791491 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0526657755374 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489486008577 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100702318537 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0589979070643 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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