People living in large cities have to face many problems in everyday life. What are those problems?
Should the government encourage people to move to regional towns?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
It is widely acknowledged that large cities’ residents facing with various kind of problems in their everday life. In this essay, I will outline these problems, and I support the ideas that government should encourage people to live in their hometowns for many reasons which will be further discussed in this essay.
Several problems faced by people living in the large cities can be identified. Most importantly, these cities are over-crowded for living which impacts their the quality of life. Since, a hundred of offices, schools, organizations are located in these large cities resulting in a numerous number of people who studies and works here. A further effect from this would be a traffic congestion problem which can be seen in their daily life from an overload of private car usage to travel to their work. Another problem is a higher competition in working compared to the work places in rural area. This is because there is a high job opportunity in the large cities as it is locations of many global firms’ headquarter, countries’ financial centre, and many government’s organizations. Thus, people leaves their hometown to seek more job opportunities in the large cities leading to increase a competition rate in the workforces.
According to these problems experienced by people in the large cities, it is crucial to encourage people to live in their hometowns for many reasons. First, over-crowded cities contribute to environmental pollutions, such as air pollution, waste disposal problems. Hence, people should be spreaded out to their hometown and live in a good environment conditions. In addition, it is government’s responsibility to provide a high quality of education system in all areas of the country for the purpose of producing employable people. Consequently, it is unnecessary for people in rural areas to move to the town for having more job opportunities.
In conclusion, the large cities’ residents witness several problems like over-crowded and high competition. In my opinion, the government should encourage people to live in their hometowns for the environmental aspects and ensure their citizen that they have an equal opportunity as people living in the large cities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, hence, if, so, thus, as to, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1893.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36260623229 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19800795077 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.490084985836 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 596.7 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7638013438 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.3125 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0625 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0625 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325476199182 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124302482389 0.084324248473 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0730980687736 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.235432376907 0.151304729494 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0170095124613 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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