The chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.

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The chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.

This bar graph compares the percentage of Australian people who are involved in doing physical activities on a regular basis. The statistics are segregated based age groups and gender, starting from 15 until 65 years old and above.

Young boys between the age of 15 to 24, were the ones who were most involved in doing regular exercises accounting for 52%. Moving onward, the percentage of males involved in any kind of exercise kept decreasing between 25 to 44 of about 42% and 39% respectively. This was followed by a slight increase in the percentage in elderly people reaching around 46% males who are aged 65 and above.

On the other hand, females involvement in physical activities was lower than young boys by about 5%. However, females between 25 and 35, were more engaged in health fitness than males by around 6%. Going forward to older female age groups, the percentages kept on increasing gradually until they reached 47% in the last group.

Overall, it is clear that females were involved in more regular exercises than their male counterparts throughout their entire life-span, except for young people.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, except for, kind of, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 941.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 187.0 196.424390244 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0320855615 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60363562555 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593582887701 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 284.4 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 19.4466665397 43.030603864 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 104.555555556 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7777777778 22.9334400587 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 5.23603664747 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187113671742 0.215688989381 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0849965206035 0.103423049105 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0689142172126 0.0843802449381 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121862939285 0.15604864568 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0756406363197 0.0819641961636 92% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.2329268293 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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