To what extent do you agree with the following statement?
Popular events like the Football World Cup and other international sporting occasions are essential in easing international tension and releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way.
Because of economic disparity, the relationships among nations are full of tensions. Many people believe that international tensions can be eased by organizing events like football world cups, Olympics and so on. I do accord with this notion that cross-border events reduce political tensions, and enhance the respect among citizens of different countries.
To embark on, sports are the events that always bind people. For instance, in our schooling days, we make plethora of friends in our society, while playing game with each other. Similarly, if games are organised between two nations, citizens of both countries will be able to exchange their thoughts. To illustrate, India and Pakistan had a heinous relationship since independence i.e. since 1947; many battles were fought to resolve their disputes. However, in 2000, both countries decided to have peaceful talk to resolve their differences and a bilateral cricket tournament was organised. Since then, both countries able to maintain peaceful relationship; people of both countries understand each other, and respect each other’s values and culture.
Furthermore, in international events, emotion of patriotism is always at the peak. Although only players are involved in a game, whole nation is standing behind them. A good gesture among players will lead to a harmonious relationship among nations. For example, political relationships between South Korea and North Korea is not at all healthy; both countries are ready to fight each other. But, when an injured player was helped by South Korean player in a football match, it melted heart of fans of both countries.
To recapitulate, to ease political tension and to develop respect of each other’s culture, values and patriotism, organizing international events such as football world cups are one of the best way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, similarly, so, then, while, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1563.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48421052632 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92736318502 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610526315789 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.7310949106 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.2 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180374988478 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.060570646695 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0810625596113 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136148070618 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0832952508902 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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