There is an increasing number of people who believe that computers are a remarkable breakthrough in the last centuries. From my perspective, i go along with this belief for several reasons.
First and foremost, computers facilitate greatly every aspects of life. With the birth of computer followed by encoding , numerous of manual job could takes another step forward.For example, information storage which often takes a great amount of time and efforts would be replaced computer storage which has unlimited space and shorten saving processes. Furthermore, that computers not only play a critical role in creating a large number of employment but also bring about tremendous economic advantages for the country is indispensable. In other words, The more popular computer are, the more demand it need, as a result, more computer company would be found which lead to more new job would be born such as computer engineers, programmers, and more economic benefits would be reaped.
On the other hand, computers are the prerequisite condition for following technology namely internet, artificial intelligence, smart phone, and so on which build up a milestone in human civilization in communication, manufacturing, and much more. Were computer never to create, countless inventions based on computers would not be existed. For instance, the internet which take a important part in communication, studying, working would be vanished along with computer. Human civilization would be collapsed to a hundred years ago, in which traditional method is used such as send letter by horse, ship.
In brief, i am strongly on the belief that computers are the greatest invention in recent centuries by its essential advantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, so, for example, for instance, in brief, such as, as a result, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1451.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43445692884 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05143358718 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632958801498 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.9750276186 49.4020404114 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.909090909 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2727272727 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.9090909091 7.06120827912 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151500334822 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0636574182695 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0278817803925 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0939513825462 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0261140449789 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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