Nowadays TV has become an essential part of life. Medium to spread news & awareness and for
some it acts like a companion. What is your opinion about this?
To be frank, yes ! television is the most entertaining companion of lonely souls, source of information for media freaks and aged people.Television has been evolving since 1970's, from a basic black and white coloured picture to a device that has features to communicate with other electronic appliances and 3D technology embed in it to give a rich and enhanced feeling and experience to the people watching it.
Firstly television, the most significant source of obtaining news worldwide has played an advantageous role among most of the viewers. They are able to gather information about various aspects such as sports, weather, politics and local incidents that could help them in making better business decisions or plan their day to day life. For example, those people invested in stocks, trade based on trade market news
Many people staying away from their family or who dont have much friends circle, tend to spend their precious time watching TV or playing games in TV. In doing so, they dont feel bored and are occupied. For exmaple, students and children watch sports or cartoons instead of concentrating on their studies and career. They ignore watching knowledgeable channels as they dont keep them entertaining as far as games, movies and cartoons are concerned.
To conclude, people should understand the pros and cons of watching television and educate their family and friends to use it for productive purpose rather than to cultivate destructive ideas within them watching inappropriate broadcasts.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, so, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 8.36945812808 203% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1282.0 1207.87684729 106% => OK
No of words: 242.0 242.827586207 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29752066116 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8476771563 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 139.433497537 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.657024793388 0.580463131201 113% => OK
syllable_count: 379.8 379.143842365 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6551724138 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.5024630542 146% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 102.711975933 50.4703680194 204% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 160.25 104.977214359 153% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.25 20.9669160288 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.25397266985 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.054241316984 0.242375264174 22% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.021415631553 0.0925447433944 23% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0241958804848 0.071462118173 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0296994343491 0.151781067708 20% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0291796794613 0.0609392437508 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.7 12.6369458128 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 53.1260098522 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.9458128079 137% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 11.5310837438 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 55.0591133005 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 9.94827586207 206% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.3980295567 135% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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