Some people like to save extra money. Other people prefer to spend it right away. Which do you prefer to do?
A money is everything but it is nothing at the same time. It could be used in everywhere and every time by people, companies, countries or anything which can use them. However, consuming the money sometimes would be a problem if they used a lot and people have to save an extra money. On the other hand for some activities human can spend much money because they have enough money.
First of all, let's think saving extra money. In this approach, there would be some problems if people spending so much money and they have to improve their cashes in their case or bank accounts. For example, some people have several an ill problems which had been solved by their doctors and in their communities' hospitals, they may be have a big families which had been looked by them. When they face these types of problems they must have much money, if not they could be injured or they could be died. Moreover, nowadays there are several facilities which done by people such as studying in universities. All students need the money for their graduation, and they must figure out their money problems. So, students' parents should increase their budget for education.
Now, let's consider spending money right away. Today, there are so many daily activities in our world such as travelling, playing games, doing sports, joining social clubs, etc. All of these actions causes decreasing money, and these affect the budget of its owners. But, all of them are good and they impact people positively. For example, it could be used by human for their travelling, buying a thing such as a cell phone, a car etc and these activities influence people's mental health.
In my opinion, almost all people could be faced any problems in that era, so they should save more money for solving their problems. Taking account of all above reasons I definitely agree first statement.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'money'.
Suggestion: Money
A money is everything but it is nothing at the ...
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Line 1, column 270, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'extra money'.
Suggestion: extra money
...they used a lot and people have to save an extra money. On the other hand for some activities ...
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Line 3, column 241, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'problem'?
Suggestion: problem
...xample, some people have several an ill problems which had been solved by their doctors ...
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Line 3, column 348, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'family'?
Suggestion: family
...ities hospitals, they may be have a big families which had been looked by them. When the...
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Line 5, column 490, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...vities influence peoples mental health. In my opinion, almost all people could b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, for example, such as, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 52.1666666667 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1540.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 320.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8125 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35510582299 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540625 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 618.680645161 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.0253006404 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.5555555556 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7777777778 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.55555555556 5.45110844103 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215944643205 0.236089414692 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0809691795328 0.076458572812 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0585895555261 0.0737576698707 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139818538995 0.150856017488 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0374042163561 0.0645574589148 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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