Currentl there is a trend towards the use of alternative forms of medicine. However at best these methods are ineffective and at worst the may be dangerous. To what extent do you agree with this statement
Nowadays is believed that there a preference concerning the application alternative types of medicine. I completely agree there was bigger disadvantages than advantages for patient such as greater risk of death to them who chosen alternative forms of medicine.
In the one hand, the advantages is to reduce expense of treatment. It is because people who elected alternative types of medicine nit spent money for many procedure in medical treatment. For example in indonesia had several cheaper cost selection to get alternative treatment than in the hospital such as cancer medical treatment with plants medicine and abstinence to eat certain food. As result, the patient not spent big cost to heal doctor and medicine, only disburse herbal medicine and therapy treatment. Large finance treatment was very important became consideration in Society. In particular low economic community.
In the other hand, the biggest disadvantages impacted to patient was increased greater risk of death. It is due to alternative medicine given treatment and medicine without health theory so be able made things worse. For instance mostly alternative forms of medicine for cancer disease suggest poor diet without sufficient nutrients. Therefor made patient's condition was impaired. It is no doubt that this matter succeed the largest cause risk of death.
I do not believe that chosen alternative types of medicine had more positive impact to heal from illness in my opinion exactly there was dangerous risk when the patient left medical treatment and adopted alternative medicine to solve health problems. In conclusion, from where I stand I trusted that alternative medicine had the biggest back drop for patient rather than the advantages
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 151, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun procedure seems to be countable; consider using: 'many procedures'.
Suggestion: many procedures
...e types of medicine nit spent money for many procedure in medical treatment. For example in in...
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Line 7, column 338, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: backdrop
...at alternative medicine had the biggest back drop for patient rather than the advantages
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in particular, no doubt, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1469.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46096654275 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83850845024 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550185873606 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 54.48849012 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.9333333333 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9333333333 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0858364925034 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0311560447007 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0284016316652 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0653643787552 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0305343313745 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.09 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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