Write a letter to the manager of a restaurant which is close to your apartment regarding the repair work you are going to have.
In your letter
What is the repairing about?
How it is going to affect the restaurant and the customers?
Remedies to handle the problem.
Dear Sir,
I am writing to bring your attention to the construction work, that is going to happen in my apartment, which could cause a little trouble to your clients.
Actually, the kitchen cupboard of my house has completely damaged by the introduction of termites. The owner would send some workers to repair the wooden material, in the coming weekend. It would probably take a few days to carry out the refurbishment procedure.
Your restaurant is very close to my apartment, therefore you might have to face some problems with the renovation. Moreover, the workers would use some drilling machines to fit the stuff, which could create unbearable noise that might irritate you as well as your customers. Although, the continuous high-pitched sounds of the instruments would cause a headache to some of them. But, we would do our best to cut the level of noise to an extent.
Nevertheless, I would like to recommend you to play the music in the restaurant during the work as it would shun the noise. Kindly keep the windows of your eatery close for next few days to reduce the inconvenience. It would be grateful if you could understand our concerns.
Looking forward to a favorable response.
Yours faithfully,
John Smith
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ause a little trouble to your clients. Actually, the kitchen cupboard of my hou...
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Line 8, column 276, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...irritate you as well as your customers. Although, the continuous high-pitched sounds of ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, look, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 4.92783505155 264% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 0.0 5.05154639175 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1053.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 208.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0625 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83772383967 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605769230769 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 303.3 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9277453918 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.0 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15384615385 4.34317383033 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205903584709 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0634370707236 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0658651293373 0.0603063233224 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0972881323498 0.12726935374 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0740909412586 0.0580467560999 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 8.71597938144 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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