some people suggest that a country should try to produce all the food for its population and import as little food as possible. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
it is a common belief that countries all over the world should have self-sufficient supply rather than import food from other countries. While some people agree that the country should try to produce their food for themselves instead of getting foods from overseas countries. However, I cannot entirely agree with the given statement.
On the one hand, some people argue that a country should try to make plenty of to reserve for their dwellers because of some factors. First of all, ensuring quality products that they consume. For instance, people can know the food resources or those products whether it is good or bad. Moreover, the self-sufficient supply can help cut the waste of foods in the world. For example, when the farmer grows plants. Afterward, they seek seeds to reserve for the next term without buying seeds.
Nevertheless, I believe that the self-sufficient supply can bring some downside. Firstly, it is not suitable for all the countries in the world. For example, some countries had been desertification and drought. Therefore, they cannot grow plants. Secondly, it does not benefit the global economy. For instance, when a country does not react with another country in the world, it can be isolation. This will reduce their economy and lag behind compared with the world.
In summarize, while some people think that their country does not need to import foods or goods from foreign countries because they can grow foods and produce all the food for themselves. However, I disagree with this because this will bring some drawbacks and not suitable in some countries
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1338.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10687022901 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61035219495 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.492366412214 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 382.5 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.6808722309 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.3333333333 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5555555556 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.356327631168 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109647633337 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106525259405 0.0667982634062 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.254050207336 0.151304729494 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0879871925041 0.056905535591 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.1 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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