pressuring on students
In contemporary, young generations be confronted with educational, social, and commercial pressures. This essay will outline the reasons why pressuring on students is occurring, and offer some measures to tackle this issue.
Firstly, this phenomenon exits simply because, from an educational perspective, study hardly with more subjects as well as homework lead to students having less time for their hobby and family. Equally important is that in social view, people are more likely to respect money and have more ambitious. Thus, the professions put children into heavily pressuring in earn money and get high positions in their future.
However, there are a variety of possible solution available to address this problem. The main way to combat this issue is reforming state educational system. For instance, in Swedish education, where the student just studies 5 hours per day and without homework that be considered the best system in the world. Therefore, with reducing the pressure of students, the schools can help the student not only study better but also receive many useful abilities when the attend in social activities. A second potential solution is that the government should raise people’s awareness about the values of life. In evidence, they could provide more subjects, books, and television programs which focus on family relationship, love, and their culture. Consequence children would receive less pressure on studying and their future career.
In conclusion, it is clear that there are different reasons for this tendency and possible approaches should be considered to tackle with this problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1378.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49003984064 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76176379305 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.653386454183 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.9782972057 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.0 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3076923077 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.76923076923 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219838139956 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0694363029056 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0868384346895 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128971318917 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0794635580484 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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