In contemporary, more and more individuals in many urban areas have little information about people who live around and lake the sense of community. What cause and solution for this problem ?
In contemporary, more and more individuals in many urban areas have little information about people who live around and lake the sense of community. This essay will outline the reasons why this situation is occurring, and offer some measures to tackle this issue.
Firstly, this tendency exists simply because people who live in modern times are busy, and therefore they would have less time with communities. To solve this problem, reducing working and studying time for citizens in the long term is a good solution. Take an example, in some developed countries like Sweden, where most adults and students were allowed to work and study part-time. Thus citizens have time to take part in activities communities.
Equally important, the cause would be lead this problem should be that there are not enough clubs and social activities for local people. In this situation, investing heavily local cultural and social institutions could be effective. For illustrate, the government should build a modern cultural center held activities such as cooking or sports in order to attract local residents. Therefore, citizens have more opportunities to not only make friends but also improve understanding about their neighbors.
Lastly, the last reason for this problematic situation could be that lifestyle of young generations that they spend much time on social networks. In this case, the feasible approach is to encourage children to take part in outside activities with communities. In evidence, the parents should take their offspring with them into social activities to set a good example for their children. Consequence, if the children follow their parents, they could improve their relationship with their neighbors.
In conclusion, it is clear that there are different reasons for this phenomenon and possible approaches should be considered to tackle with this problem.
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...heir relationship with their neighbors. In conclusion, it is clear that there ar...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, lastly, so, therefore, thus, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1587.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41638225256 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77063324492 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57337883959 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.4823811021 49.4020404114 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 105.8 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5333333333 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46666666667 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295410320404 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106246372996 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.187659883419 0.0667982634062 281% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188739994143 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.19285845201 0.056905535591 339% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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