Environmental problems are too big for individual countries and individual people to address. We have reached the stage where the only way to protect the environment to address it at an international level. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Nowadays, Environmental issues were not only task of countries citizens and personal but also international responsibility. I strongly agree with the idea mentioned because of its impacts globally.
Individually has a great impact to protect environment from human activities. This is because there are many ways to preserve our environment in daily life. For example, people should bring along recycle bags while shopping so that the usage of plastic bags can be cut down. These will definitely help in minimising environmental issues as fewer plastic bags being used means that less air pollution which is caused by burning plastic bags in the rubbish dump sites. In addition, on a national level, each government can impose tough regulations to be followed by companies to produce environment-friendly products, in manufacturing, industry or agriculture sector. In Indonesia, Government determines limitation of carbon emissions and associated it with fines so that companies will take it seriously and this can only be forced by authorities. This is believed an effective method to prevent the environment being worse.
On the other hand, on international scale, the preservation of the environment for the present and future generations is the responsibility of all states and they should ensure that the activities within their jurisdiction or control do not cause damage to the environment by evolving natural laws and norms regulations in the field of environment. This is also a crucial method to tackle the problems related to environment issue.
In conclusion, I believed not only individual has responsibility to solve the environmental issues because it is impossible for only one individual in the society but the government and international should take actions to solve the environmental problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1546.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54121863799 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.35782806496 2.80592935109 120% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584229390681 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 83.5089399738 49.4020404114 169% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.833333333 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.25 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211036674349 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0751037987867 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0458507398065 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131868476881 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0296231156773 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.15 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.