Government should reduce their investment in arts, music and painting. Agree or disagree?
Surely there has been no time in the history where the lives of people have changed more dramatically. A quick reflection on the typical day reveals arts, music and painting have been one of the most prominent topics in the contemporary discussion. People have always intrigued to analysis and explain whether government should spend money or not. I will elaborate both sides in the further paragraphs.
To begin with, there are myriad pros of utilize money on arts and painting. The first and foremost, majority of masses around the world are fond of painting and music. They spend huge chunk of money on these profession with which country have chance to grow up. Probing further, majority of painting are made on old tradition so, citizens will stay in touch with their culture and tradition. Music is also souring very rapidly.
On the contrary, authority should invest money on other sectors as well. Firstly, they should put emphasis on employment opportunities because everybody knows new generation does not get jobs after education due to large unemployment rate. Moreover, poverty is also major trouble in these days which has become main cause of concern for the nation.
To conclude, I firmly believe that authority should not utilize all money on art, painting and music because there are also some other sectors which are inevitable for the nation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 203, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this profession' or 'these professions'?
Suggestion: this profession; these professions
...usic. They spend huge chunk of money on these profession with which country have chance to grow ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, moreover, so, well, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 20.9802955665 38% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1143.0 1207.87684729 95% => OK
No of words: 225.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50825796614 2.71678728327 92% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635555555556 0.580463131201 109% => OK
syllable_count: 365.4 379.143842365 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.4256933941 50.4703680194 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.9230769231 104.977214359 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3076923077 20.9669160288 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53846153846 7.25397266985 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157526817221 0.242375264174 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0511471433742 0.0925447433944 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.041041479706 0.071462118173 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0848891224747 0.151781067708 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00820807807973 0.0609392437508 13% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 12.6369458128 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.1260098522 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 11.5310837438 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 55.0591133005 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 61.0 Out of 90
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