Most people prefer to eat ready food rather than homemade food these days. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?
These days life changed, and many facilities appear for people to rely on, one of these is ready food. That’s why most people prefer to eat fast food more than homemade food. Eating ready food have advantages and disadvantages.
On one hand, people believe that ready food have advantages and make their life easier. First, people won’t waste their time on cooking and can benefit from this time to work extra hours. Second, way of living changed, most family members are working, and no one is free to prepare food. However, delivery is dominated in most restaurants and shops, so people won’t turn their car and consume petrol to grab their food. For example, when my wife is out of the house, I usually order ready food to gain more free time, to finish my job duties.
On the other hand, some people think that fast food has disadvantages. First, people will face health problems, such as obesity, increase in fat that lead to heart-attack, due to consuming unhealthy food. Second, waste of money, since buying ready food is expensive, especially if someone is ordering daily more than once. Moreover, people will get use to this lifestyle and won’t know how to organize their salaries and control their expenses. For example, my brother was one of this kind of people that rarely eat homemade food, he faced a health problem due to consuming a lot of fast food.
As a conclusion, there is two type of people, some prefer to eat ready food and think there are advantages from it, others believe there are disadvantages. In my opinion, having home made food is less expenses, and have positive impacts on our health in future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 7, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'days'' or 'day's'?
Suggestion: days'; day's
These days life changed, and many facilities appea...
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Line 7, column 197, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun expenses is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...In my opinion, having home made food is less expenses, and have positive impacts on ...
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Line 7, column 252, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...and have positive impacts on our health in future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, moreover, second, so, for example, kind of, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1377.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8485915493 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48201974998 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538732394366 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.2800282885 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 91.8 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9333333333 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.434226624927 0.244688304435 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.171192820957 0.084324248473 203% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10955268727 0.0667982634062 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.306404678762 0.151304729494 203% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.132274603418 0.056905535591 232% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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