In many countries, the proportion of older people is steadily increasing. Does this trend have more positive or negative effects on the society?
It is generally believed that major proportion of world population is shared by the older people. This may be a positive sign for a nation and vice versa. This essay will present arguments for and against the increasing older population.
On one hand, it can be seen that a country having a greater number of older population is beneficial in a sense that it develops more sense of respect and harmony among the society. Older people are more mature and experienced, and they can influence the way society lives and make decisions. A society becomes more caring, loving and a better place to live in. For example, in Arian society, whenever there develops an argument, aged people help resolving that and no one challenges that in their respect.
In contrast, elder population may have negative effect on the society. As we all know that old people are old-fashioned. They don’t like to keep up pace with the modern thoughts and still believes in the past regime, coming out of comfort zone and thinking out of the box. Furthermore, they still believe in the old customs and traditions and criticiz if not followed according to their teachings. To elaborate, one of the vintage societies in Balochistan still don’t encourage the female education due to their traditional customs. If found someone, then they are badly criticized by them.
To sum up all, advantageous effects of respect, harmony, loving and caring in a society outweighs the disadvantages of old-fashioned and traditional elderly people living in a society. In my opinion, society will be more independent, courageous and peace loving due to courtesy of old class.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 447, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to resolve' or 'resolve'.
Suggestion: to resolve; resolve
... develops an argument, aged people help resolving that and no one challenges that in thei...
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Line 3, column 71, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ay have negative effect on the society. As we all know that old people are old-fas...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, may, so, still, then, for example, in contrast, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1374.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05147058824 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86193813331 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580882352941 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6320982764 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.6 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1333333333 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.93333333333 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213197427646 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0698727248663 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0496273597198 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123333201821 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355176578525 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.