The real talent of a popular musician cannot accurately be assessed until the musician has been dead for several generations, so that his or her fame does not interfere with honest assessment.
As, in a 21st century, I think it is not fully correct to say the given fact that musicians are more profound and their talent are assessed before there death. With, the rise of technological advancement, the world is a small place and the prodigy of a young boy can easily be shared through internet. So, I am not fully satisfy with this fact and in the present situation musicians don't need to die, in order to show their talent which they possessed.
Everyday, I hear the musical talent of some of the very popular musicians who are dead, and still has the greater legacy than anyone in the music industry. The fact that musicians like, Beethoven and other musicians were very talented, and were able to show their talents to the world, when they were very young. In my point of view, if you are talented and if you could create your own fan base, it will be the catalyst for the fame- for this fame you don't have to die. And, in this 21st century you are born with the gift, that never in the humanity has any one been priviliged to have, this gift of technology.
We could easily produce our own albums and share it with the world, and if you are talented in the music then notthing will ever be the thwarte on your path. We have many examples were very talented musicians, are popular before their death because of their talent. We just need a fan following, and a heart, to understand what is needed for the mass, or what kind of music they like to listen to, and could produce our own gift of music and give it to the world.
Yes, its the fact that many musicians, who never faced any popularism in the past century, are held with upmost respect and dignity after their death for their musical talent they possesses. But, we lived through dark ages, in which one society of man is held high, and in those chaos other masses are held low. We came out of those moments, in this new age and there's one gift we possess is technology and we could easily share our talent with the world.
So, its not safe to say that in this century, the musician's popularity only comes after their death. Yes, it is somewhat true as we have examples to prove that, but we are a developing society and as we developed these things are now obsolete.
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...atalyst for the fame- for this fame you dont have to die. And, in this 21st century ...
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...he gift, that never in the humanity has any one been priviliged to have, this gift of t...
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...re their death because of their talent. We just need a fan following, and a heart,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, still, then, i think, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 58.0 33.0505617978 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1822.0 2235.4752809 82% => OK
No of words: 417.0 442.535393258 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.36930455635 5.05705443957 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5189133491 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.17180675704 2.79657885939 78% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.470023980815 0.4932671777 95% => OK
syllable_count: 578.7 704.065955056 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 6.24550561798 224% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.77640449438 450% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.1381958161 60.3974514979 42% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 121.466666667 118.986275619 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8 23.4991977007 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8 5.21951772744 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186663384715 0.243740707755 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0719262610935 0.0831039109588 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.043480837611 0.0758088955206 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111957955927 0.150359130593 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0513818860782 0.0667264976115 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 48.8420337079 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.36 12.1639044944 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 8.38706741573 85% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 100.480337079 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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