Advantages and disadvantages of living in an era in which new things are constantly being invented?
Surely there has been no time in history where the lives of people have changed more dramatically. A quick reflection on typical day revels new things are constantly being invented this has been one of prominent topic in the contemporary discussion people have always held some conflicting view on this. This essay will discuss both of the argument.
To began this, in today’s world technology is developed at a repaid rate. The gadget that is latest today is antique tomorrow. Moreover, as a result of this repaid development, the wheel is likely the most vital machine creation of all time. Nowadays, almost every machining that is being constructed subsequence to the start of industrial revolution inculcates the basic principal which is generated by mankind. It is difficult to envision any motorized frame work that would be conceivable without the wheel or idea of symmetrical component moving in round movement on axis. Also, living in era there are more new technologies are invented. There is smooth and remote lifestyle in modern days with the help of new technology. Scientists are research access to new technology. But there are also disadvantages that are increase in different types of pollution by more use of technology. It also increase birth of new disease and secondary lifestyle.
Overall we watch in this easy that living in era is important but it increase pollution and other diseases.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... that living in era is important but it increase pollution and other diseases.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, second, so, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 10.5418719212 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1189.0 1207.87684729 98% => OK
No of words: 231.0 242.827586207 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14718614719 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89244878997 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636363636364 0.580463131201 110% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 379.143842365 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.4815216475 50.4703680194 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.9285714286 104.977214359 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 20.9669160288 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.42857142857 7.25397266985 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.12807881773 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229565817033 0.242375264174 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0634855600184 0.0925447433944 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0613103170041 0.071462118173 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133099478948 0.151781067708 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0263476871437 0.0609392437508 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 12.6369458128 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 53.1260098522 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 11.5310837438 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 55.0591133005 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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