In the modern world, it is possible to shop, work and communicate with
People via the internet and live without any face-to-face contact with others. Is this a positive or negative development?
In this day and age, people are able to do shopping, work, and communicate with others via the internet and they just interact with others through their technology devices rather than face to face CONVERSATION. In my opinion, there are both positive and negative effects.
On the one hand, the living through the internet can be extremely positive. Firstly, the internet allows business people in different country interact without ever meeting each other. It can save money for institutions. Secondly, shopping online might bring many benefits and certainly optimize time for people. For instance, instead of spending time to do a bit shopping, people who have a hectic schedule just make an online order and during time-waiting, keep continue their job. Finally, many people use social networks, like facebook and instagram, to make new friends and find people who share common interests and connect togethers through the internet. It might be a fascinating experience brought by the internet.
On the other hand, there are certain drawbacks that people need to consider. First of all, spending too much time on the internet through technology devices can unexpectedly lead to social isolation for people, especially young generations. In some cases, a person who have thousands “friend” on the social network, but few actual real-world companions. Besides, another potential hazard of communication via technology is a lack of privacy. Communications you send over the internet maybe insecure, allowing third parties to read contents of user messages and emails in order to advertise or even sales user personal information.
In conclusion, although shopping, working, and communicating online are positive during the technology era, there are several drawbacks that people should consider.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, finally, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, third, for instance, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1538.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5523465704 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92952670336 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617328519856 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.300990193 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.533333333 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4666666667 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1333333333 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180031317971 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0544344945032 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0605846324446 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120073562717 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0944195019381 0.056905535591 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.91 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.