In some countries an increasing number of people suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
There are some states which faced their citizens has health issues due to excessive junk food consumption and to reduce that, some people agree the government should enforce higher tax for junk food provider. In my opinion, by imposing higher tax on junk food industry will hinder only middle and lower icome society.
Currently, due to busiest life people have tight schedule which lead them to eat junk food which can be ready in a short time although they realize that such food has bad impact for their life if they continue comsume fast food excessively. In Indonesia, based on Health Ministry survey, one of the biggest causing obesity is junk food consumption. This is because junk food contains chemical ingredients such as monosodiun glutamat to maintain its taste during stroraged which has bad impact for healthy.
In other hand, by imposing a higher tax will only make junk food unaffordable to poor people thus they will cook proper meals at home that actually good for their health. However, the taxes will not affect affluent from buying junk food and remain continue to consume it. That means tax increasing on junk food will only has effect for some comunities. Some people still eat junk food because its avaiable in every supermarket while healthy food alterbatibes are not conveniently available. Perhaps a better solution is to make healthy food affordable and accessible which are avaible in supermarket.
In conlusion, incleaning the tax on junk food will only hinder low income group from consume them. If the government attract to reduce the consumption of fast food, provide healthy food alternatives more affordable and accrssible is the best solution.
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Suggestion: to the busiest
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, however, if, so, still, thus, while, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1415.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1268115942 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56303384919 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557971014493 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3940699036 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.916666667 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280152364497 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12684356432 0.084324248473 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475210721644 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196617972361 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0369750287703 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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