In underdeveloped countries, tourism has disadvantages and can be said the opposite as opposite. Discuss your opinions and give examples.
Tourism has gained immense popularity in the past few decades. With the upsurge in globalization, this trend has also been boomed all around the world and provided colossal benefit to the economy of many countries. However, some people opine that this trend is proving devastating for the wellbeing of a country. My opinion, however, coincides with the former notion. This essay will elaborate on viewpoints and hence lead to a reasoned conclusion.
There is a myriad of arguments in favor of my stance. The most preponderant one is that tourism has provided an ample amount of occupation opportunities in developing countries. Increasing tourists have generated several sources of income for the local population. For example, the economy of Thailand is based mainly on tourism. In addition, these places are gaining popularity among people around the world. Therefore, it has become an indispensable part of the underdeveloped countries.
Further elaborating, it can be said that this vogue is decreasing cultural barriers among people. Not only people are visiting new places but also they are learning about their traditions. For instance, tourists come to know about various rituals and foods while they spend their time in that particular country. In addition, the history of that place is gaining fame which was not possible without tourism. Hence, it is proving quite advantageous for eliminating cultural and communication barriers around the world.
In view of the arguments outlined above, it can be concluded that tourism has provided occupation to the people suffering from poverty in underdeveloped countries. As a result, increasing the overall economy of that country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Further,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1427.0 1207.87684729 118% => OK
No of words: 263.0 242.827586207 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42585551331 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95522642311 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 139.433497537 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566539923954 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 379.143842365 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6551724138 142% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.5024630542 68% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.7123251087 50.4703680194 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.2777777778 104.977214359 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6111111111 20.9669160288 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88888888889 7.25397266985 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 2.91625615764 343% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14889830672 0.242375264174 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0430350393315 0.0925447433944 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564673796809 0.071462118173 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0986118511801 0.151781067708 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.045749169982 0.0609392437508 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 12.6369458128 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 53.1260098522 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.62 11.5310837438 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 55.0591133005 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.3980295567 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 57.0 Out of 90
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