The bar chart compares and contrasts data on the changes in the number of members in both genders anticipating fitness activity over a three-decade period from 1970 to 2000.
Generally speaking, despite fluctuations in fitness membership, more women involved in working out than men did in this time period.
More specifically, the overall increase in female fitness membership was 1000, from 1000 members in 1970 to 2000 members in 2000. For the opposite sex, however, the figure experienced a declined of 1000 members in the same period of time. Starting at 2000 members in the first year, the male members rose to 4000 in the next five years, followed by a downward trend to less than 2000 in 1985. The figure soon experienced a rapid increase and reached a peak of 5000 members in 1995. This figure then dropped significantly and hit the lowest point of 1000, which was half of the female members in 2000. It is interesting to note that the members from both sexes were approximately 2000 in the year 1990. The biggest difference between the two genders was 1000 for women in 1970 and 5000 for men in 1995, a difference of 4000 members in 25 years.
- Nowadays many animal species are becoming extinct Some people believe that countries and individuals must solve this problem others believe that humans beings are more important Discuss both views and give your own opinion 95
- The pie charts below show the average household expenditures in Japan and Malaysia in the year 2010. 78
- The chart below shows the number of jobs in tourism related industries in one UK citiy between 1989 and 2009 Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant 73
- Some people think reading stories in books is better than watching TV or playing computer games for children To what extent do you agree or disagree 90
- New technologies have changed the way children spend their free time Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages 92
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 224, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
... a declined of 1000 members in the same period of time. Starting at 2000 members in the first ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 958.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 201.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76616915423 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63534174505 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532338308458 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.1857298416 43.030603864 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 106.444444444 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 22.9334400587 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.11111111111 5.23603664747 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130500556131 0.215688989381 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0594133845035 0.103423049105 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0480032911445 0.0843802449381 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0890996720136 0.15604864568 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0239762206789 0.0819641961636 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.2329268293 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 61.2550243902 122% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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