It is widely argued that many fresh employees have major problems with soft skills performance like lacking collaboration between co-workers. This issue mainly due to the lack of confidence and side effects of being highly exposed to technological devices. This essay will first give plausible explanations of this problem and then talk about a reasonable solution.
First of all, confidence plays a crucial role in performing interpersonal skills in the workplace. Many new employees are not confident enough to engage in the company’s activities such as delivering a speech or giving a presentation to other colleagues. Therefore, they are unable to express their own ideas and give poor performance in teamwork. Secondly, rapid technological advancement also detrimentally impacts on their communication skills, problem-solving skills, and critical thinking. For example, due to high exposure to a 9-to-5-job, workers rarely have any opportunities to develop their communication skills, and thus hardly joining any conversations in group work.
To fully handle this unavoidable situation, the intervention of companies is essentially necessary to encourage their fresh employees in order to enhance their soft skills as well as collaborate efficiently in teamwork. From my perspective, organizing some team-building holidays would be the primary driver to strengthen the relationship among colleagues. Furthermore, it offers new employees a huge chance to gradually build up their confidence and increase working productivity as engaging physical outdoor activities with their collaborators.
In conclusion, the shortage of confidence and innovative devices are the main reasons why new employees cannot perform their interpersonal skills well, and thus the role of employers is crucially important to help their employees enhance their skills.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 77, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'skills'' or 'skill's'?
Suggestion: skills'; skill's
...employees have major problems with soft skills performance like lacking collaboration ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1592.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.91821561338 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.35904823445 2.80592935109 120% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628252788104 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4402401858 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.666666667 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4166666667 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5 7.06120827912 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277376752575 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.092106357889 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475016563595 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168708534983 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0311569425473 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.0946893788 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.35 12.4159519038 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.13 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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