The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or any other fields is by instilling in them sense of cooperation, not competition.
The statement states that best way to prepare young peoples for leadership in goverment, industry, or any other field is by giving them the sense of the cooperation among them instead of the competition. sense of competition is necessary in the young minds as they are the next generation which is going to represent the country in the global nations.
The young minds i.e the new generation should have the sense of the competition among them because that will stir up them to improve themselves otherwise it may lead to the complacentness among them.Childrens of the school, should be developed or given guidances in such a way that competition is very necessary and the whole of the world is behind it but at the same time they should be preached that cooperation among the country members should be respected. And at time of need they should be helped without any idea of the competition.
Sometimes just dealing all the matters with the sense of the cooperation could be not advantageous as you become more self satisfied and always give chance to other people to go ahead just by cooperating with them in every matter. For example if you are standing in a queue outside a monolithic organization for the interview call, and you cooperating everyone by allowing everyone to take your place and asking you questions which could be lament questions in the interview, it could be deleterious for your position as he might copy your best answer and replace you with the position. At such times there should be a sense of the copmpetition among you and you should tackle it in such a way that it cann't be harmful to you.
In the goverments there should be both sense of the cooperation and competition. At the time of the elections there should be competition to form the goverment while after the formation of the elections, in goverments there should be idea of the cooperation among them for making the country prosper and develop. For taking the idea globally, there should be cooperation while solving the bigger problems of the world such as the United nations more known as UN is working taking all nations together to solve the issues. And there should also be idea of competition while in trading and businesses.
Nowdays sense of the competition is very much necessary with the little sense of the cooperation among the peoples. Looking at circumstances and its later consequences the decisions should be taken with appropriate senses which could be best way for society to develop. As taking decisions and leadership completely on the basis of the cooperation can lead you backward and your leadership be qustionable.
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- TOEFL T P O 29 - Integrated Writing Task 3
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, so, while, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.5258426966 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 22.0 12.4196629213 177% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 33.0505617978 112% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 58.6224719101 116% => OK
Nominalization: 27.0 12.9106741573 209% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2201.0 2235.4752809 98% => OK
No of words: 448.0 442.535393258 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91294642857 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60065326758 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82769333722 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 215.323595506 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.415178571429 0.4932671777 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 678.6 704.065955056 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 23.0359550562 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 105.289397106 60.3974514979 174% => OK
Chars per sentence: 157.214285714 118.986275619 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.0 23.4991977007 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.07142857143 5.21951772744 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23194561087 0.243740707755 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105716616047 0.0831039109588 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.131009668377 0.0758088955206 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178971900289 0.150359130593 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.138358397524 0.0667264976115 207% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 14.1392134831 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 48.8420337079 97% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 12.1743820225 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.79 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 100.480337079 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 11.8971910112 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 11.2143820225 132% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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