International travel is becoming cheaper and more countries are opening their doors to increase the number of tourists. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages ?
Nowadays, travelling abroad becomes cheaper and more nations try to attract more vacationers. This leads to a recent argument among our community who wonders the impact of it. Hence, to settle the dispute, a further discussion will be given below.
To begin with, tourists can harm the local cultures. this is to say that they will bring new habits which are unsuitable for the domestic people. A typical example is Indonesia; there, it is mandatory for girls to wear clothing which covers almost all of their body parts. Nevertheless, foreigners influence fashion styles like wearing bikini and crop-tops which are strongly against the domestic rule. Obviously, vacationers may have a negative impact towards country’s particular tradition.
On the other hand, development owns its benefits and drawbacks. Even though rise in the number of tourists may harm the nation’s culture, local businesses will bolster. This may happen since tourists will spend their money for domestic businesses, such as purchasing souvenirs and eating traditional dishes. Subsequently, generating lucrative amount of cash for them. Needless to say, having more foreigners, locals’ prosperity may surge.
Additionally, unemployment rates may plunge as there are more vacationers. This is mainly due to more investments are made by global corporations in form of accommodation. Consequently, these new hotels will hire employees from the neighborhood. Clearly, the growth of tourists will contributes to the increase of job vacancies, since there are more sites being built.
To conclude, after having some points above, although having more tourists may have a side effect for local cultures, the advantages from different perspective outweigh the disadvantages. This is because of the increase in domestic wealth and employment rate.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 54, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
..., tourists can harm the local cultures. this is to say that they will bring new habi...
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Line 7, column 284, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'contribute'
Suggestion: contribute
...d. Clearly, the growth of tourists will contributes to the increase of job vacancies, since...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, hence, if, may, nevertheless, so, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1564.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.66666666667 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03705325959 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.655797101449 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.6157856518 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.3157894737 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5263157895 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.94736842105 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13160204867 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0364408977743 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0499783288949 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0751778271706 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0331424549831 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.01 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.